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成考英語作文:以《班規》談想法的寫作思路!

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       一、真題回放內容
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  閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
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  On the first day of her work, Sally found that a class full of problems was waiting for her; six teachers had quit before her. When she walked into the classroom,it was chaos: two boys were fighting in the far corner, yet the rest of the class seemed not to notice them; some girls were chatting and some were running about; paper,food packages and other garbage were littered around. Just when she was about to speak, a student rushed in and pushed her aside! He was twenty minutes late!
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  Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard: Rule 1: We are family! All students stopped to look at her. And she continued with Rule 2, Rule 3... In the following weeks, sally worked out 10 class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom. She patiently explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.
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  Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from the students.Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class.At the graduation ceremony, Just as she expected. she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.
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  [寫作內容]
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  1.用約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。
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  2.用約120個詞就班規談談你的想法,內容包括:
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  (1)你們班最突出的問題是什么?
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  (2)針對該間題你會設計一條什么班規?
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  (3)你認為班規會帶來什么影響?
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  [寫作要求]
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  1.作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內容,但不得直接引用原文的句子。
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  2.作文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
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  二、試題解讀
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  認真審題,努力讀取命題者的真實意圖,想要考查考生的哪些能力。閱讀材料可知,678招生考試信息網認為這應該是一篇夾敘夾議的寫作。即先簡要講述一件事,然后針對這件事所表現的現象進行深入分析。678招生信息網認為構思時,考生應充分發揮想象力,運用擴展思維,運用熟悉的、掌握的句式將隱藏的主題表達出來。678招生考試網認為敘述時需要過去式(根據題意可知,這則故事已發生),議論時需用一般現在時。避免直譯各個有要點,而應恰當運用過渡語和轉換詞,使文章行文連貫。更主要的,文章所反映的主旨要符合主流價值觀,表現積極的人生觀,傳遞正能量。
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  三、寫作信息要點
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  (1)用30個詞簡要講述材料內容。
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  (2)闡述自己班級存在的問題。并針對部分問題進行分析。
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  (3)針對上述問題提出自己的建議,或解決方案。
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  (4)若采取所議方案,班級會發生什么變化。
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  四、可用素材
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  (1)詞匯:
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  be confronted、faced with、emphasize、work out、regulate ones conduct、behavior、considerate、first and foremost、well-mannered、additionally、put up with、efficient。
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  (2)句式:
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  Faced with the misbehavior of. Sally emphasized the idea of "we are family"and... One obvious problem with our class is... In my view, this rule will definitely exert a profound and far-reaching effect on... Last but not least,studying in a group will share our experiences in solving problems. I would make it a rule that...Worst of all,they show no respect to...
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  五、注意事項
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  (1)注意30詞講述短故事時,故事雖短也要符合邏輯。
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  (2)注意分析產生問題原因時要符合邏輯。
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  (3)提出的建議要合理,符合實際,而且要積極正面,傳遞正能量。
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  (4)運用高級句式和高級詞匯,提升文章檔次。
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  (5)注意拼寫正確,書寫規范,字跡工整,保證印象分。

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