一、真題回放內容
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　　閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
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　　On the first day of her work, Sally found that a class full of problems was waiting for her; six teachers had quit before her. When she walked into the classroom,it was chaos: two boys were fighting in the far corner, yet the rest of the class seemed not to notice them; some girls were chatting and some were running about; paper,food packages and other garbage were littered around. Just when she was about to speak, a student rushed in and pushed her aside! He was twenty minutes late!
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　　Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard: Rule 1: We are family! All students stopped to look at her. And she continued with Rule 2, Rule 3... In the following weeks, sally worked out 10 class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom. She patiently explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.
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　　Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from the students.Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class.At the graduation ceremony, Just as she expected. she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.
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　　[寫作內容]
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　　1.用約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。
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　　2.用約120個詞就班規談談你的想法,內容包括:(1)你們班最突出的問題是什么?(2)針對該間題你會設計一條什么班規?(3)你認為班規會帶來什么影響?
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　　[寫作要求]
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　　1.作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。
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　　2.作文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
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　　二、作文范文
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　　Confronted with the misbehavior of her new class, Sally emphasized the idea of“we are family"and regulated the students' conduct,which have shaped them to be confident and well behaved.
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　　One obvious problem with our class is the lack of team work.Everyone is minding their own business, thus giving rise to inefficiency in their study and even putting a limit to their potential.
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　　To address the issue,I would make it a rule that every Friday I divide them into groups of four and assign a project for them to complete.
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　　From where I stand, this rule will definitely exert a profound and far-reaching effect on students' academic performance. First and foremost,we can combine our skills and knowledge as well as motivate each other for greater achievements.Additionally, studying in a group will share our experiences in solving problems more efficiently as well as promote our teamwork spirit.
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　　三、作文范文解析
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　　①emphasize和 regulate兩個高級詞匯均是動詞,簡要闡述Sally的行為過程。
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　?、趙hich引導的非限定性定語從句,準確講述了故事的結果,678招生考試網認為作者語言高度濃縮,足見組織語言的“真功夫”。
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　　③obvious置于problem前,突出存在的問題。the lack of高級詞組運用準確,正宗的英文表述法。
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　?、躷o address the issue,高級詞組運用憐當。動詞不定式置于句首,避免句子單調雷同,缺乏新意。
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　?、蓍L句式內容豐富,邏輯合理闡準確。且 definitely、profound、far-reaching、academic和performance屬高級詞匯,作者詞匯量令人佩服。
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　?、辸ill開啟的句子準確地表達了新規實行后可能的效果,內容積極正面,傳遞正能量。solve、efficient、as well as、promote等均是高級詞匯。
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　　四、名師點評
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　　通讀全篇，678招生考試信息網認為作者深諳各種從句運用之技,如 which引導的定語從句、where引導賓語從句做介詞賓語、 where引導的賓語從句做介詞賓語等,各種類型的從句層出不窮。高級句式和高級詞江的運用在準確闡述文章內容基礎上,還提升文章層次。thus、 to address from where I stand、 first and foremost等過渡短語的運用則使文章結構更緊湊,過渡更自然,行文連貫,讀起來非常爽快。總之,678招生信息網認為本篇佳作要點齊全,結構清晰,邏輯合理,語法精妙,是一篇難得的臨場佳作。
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　　五、譯文
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　　莎莉面對的新班級的不端行為,她強調“我們是一家人”,規范學生的行為理念,塑造了他們自信、良好行為。
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　　我們班的一個明顯的問題是缺乏團隊工作。每個只專注于自己的事,從而導致他們的學習效率低下,甚至限制他們的潛力。
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　　解決這個間題。我會制定個規則:每到星期五把他們分成四組,分配一個項目來完成。
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　　從我的立場來看,這一規定必將對學生的學業成績產生深遠而積極的影響。
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　　首先,我們可以把我們的技能和知識結合起來,互相激勵,取得更大的成就。此外,小組學習將有助于我們更有效地解決問題,提升我們的團隊精神。