一、江蘇成考的真題回放內容
　　
　　請闊讀下面短文,并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。
　　
　　In recent years Internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast online votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the"Most Beautiful Teacher"and the" Cutest Baby".
　　
　　Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the "Best Police Officer" competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers'daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
　　
　　Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the" Future Singer"competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.
　　
　　二、范文
　　
　　Online voting becomes more and more popular.Many people get involved in online voting in many competitions, some of which are helpful to people, while some of which make people confused about whether to vote or not.
　　
　　In my view, online voting is a new product of the development of modern science and technology.It's convenient for people to participate in some public events,wherever and whenever they take place.Beside,on-line voting can save lots of natural resources,especially paper. What's more,voting on the Internet can get instant feedback and the result of the competition.
　　
　　However,as a popular saying goes,"Ever coin has two sides."and online voting is no exception. It has its negative effects. For one thing, people feel confused, not because they don't like voting, but because they don't know how to make a decision a about voting which depends on competitive fairness.For another,it's unfair to some degree, because sometimes people don't vote for the best competitor. So, online voting should be completed further. If so, things will turn for the better. In short, I am in favor of online voting.
　　
　　三、解析:
　　
　　①作文開門見山,直接引入話題語言簡潔高效,讀起來朗朗上口。
　　
　　2)it's convenient for people to...經典句型運用,ⅱ是形式主語,加上不定式結構。678招生考試網認為作者表達方式多樣,內容豐富,表達準確。
　　
　?、踳hat's more作為過渡短語運用恰當,突出文章層次,條理更清晰。
　　
　?、躰ot because...but because運用恰當,完美解釋了投票選擇時的猶豫和困惑,文章表達效果佳。
　　
　　because引導了一個原因狀語從句,高級句式為文章添彩,提升文章檔次。適當的解釋使文章論述更合理,富有邏輯性。
　　
　?、藿浀涞目偨Y語in short簡潔直接,表達明了,完美收官。
　　
　　四、點評
　　
　　本文語言簡潔大方,表達效果很棒!在闡述正反兩方面影響時,678招生考試信息網認為作者給出的理由非常充分,解釋也很到位,使內容極富邏輯,清晰地論述了網絡投彯的優點和弊端。高級句式如which引導的定語從句、wherever和whenever所引導的讓步狀語從句、 because引導的原因狀語從句等,運用嫻熟,表達準確,為文章增色不少。動名詞、動詞不定時和非謂語動詞的運用則凸顯作者的寫作能力和語言運用能力。678招生信息網認為過渡詞或短語 besides、especially、what's more、in short等運用使文章結構緊湊,過渡自然,行文連貫,英文的質感油然而生。
　　
　　五、譯文
　　
　　在線投票越來越受歡迎。很多人參與了很多比賽的網上投票,其中有些是對人有益的,有些則讓人對是否投票感到困惑。
　　
　　在我看來,網上投票是現代科學技術發展的新產物。無論何時何地,人們都可以方便地參加一些公共活動。此外,網上投票可以節省大量的自然資源,特別是紙張。另外,在網上投票可以得到即時反饋和競爭的結果。
　　
　　然而,常言道,“硬幣都有正反兩面”,網上投票也不例外,也有其負面影響。一方面,人們感到困惑,并非他們不喜歡投票,而是因為他們不知道如何決定投票,這涉及到競爭的公平性。另一方面,在某種程度上它并不公平,因為有時人們并不會投票給表現最好的競爭者。因此,網上投票應該進一步完善,如果是這樣的話,情況會好轉的。簡言之,我贊成網上投票。