一、成考英語作文真題回放內容
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
學校即將舉辦“讀書節”,目前正廣泛征集“讀書節”宣傳冊圖片。假設你是該校學生潘陽,你已找到以下三幅圖片,決定給讀書節組委會寫一封信,推薦其中一幅,你的信須包括以下內容:
1.簡單描述你想推薦的那幅圖片;
2.闡述你用該幅圖片宣傳“讀書節”的理由。(滿分25分)
二、范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
Since the Reading Festival is around the corner①,I'm writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading②.
In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read③".It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion④.As far as I'm concerned it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you cannot only appreciate the content by yourself⑤,but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book.
In conclusion, the reason of my recommendation is that reading can be full of participation and common interest⑥.I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Pan Yang
三、解析:
?、賡ince作為連詞引導的狀語從句,高級句式運用嫻熟,且開篇點題,巧妙引入話題。
?、趙hich引導的定語從句,初步解釋圖畫,有統領下文之意。高級句式為文章添彩。
?、圻B續的現在進行時動詞,精準描述圖片內容,要點全覆蓋。
?、躨t seems that經典的主系表結構長句式,高級句式不僅表達更準確,且提升文章檔次。多種表達方式使文章出類拔萃。
⑤through which內含有一個非限定性定語從句,詳細闡述讀書氣氛和學習環境。appreciate屬高級詞匯,一個句式多個亮點,難得!
?、辤n conclusion用以總結全篇,并再次推薦所選圖,做到了呼應段首,結構更加完整。文章布局和構思巧妙,可見一斑。
四、名師點評
通讀全篇,讀者定會驚嘆于作者對于超長句式和復雜句的運用能力,以及多維度、多種表達方式闡述能力。從句層出不窮,高級詞江頻頻展現,過渡詞運用恰當,在增強文章表達力和表達效果的同時,也提升文章層次。長短句和過渡詞的恰當運用,如around the corner、recommend、be used、remind.of、discuss heatedly,as far as I'm concerned、appreciate in conclusion等,則使文
章結構更趨緊湊,行文連貫,可讀性強,
英語闊讀時的質感自然顯現,給人感覺十分舒暢?？傊?作者以此篇作文為平臺,積極調動各方面知識儲備,運用多種寫作技巧,充分展示了自己卓越的寫作本領,成就了一篇佳作的同時,也得到了滿分作為回報。
五、譯文
尊金的先生/夫人：
由于閱讀節即將來臨,我寫信向大家推薦一本可以在小冊子中用來提學生閱讀樂趣的圖片。
在圖片中,有三個學生坐在桌子前,激烈討論他們剛剛所讀到的。他們仿佛通過討論獲得很多樂趣。就我而言,當同一本書被欣賞時,它也可以是經驗分享。我理想的閱讀氛圍正是如此。通過它你不僅可以欣賞自己的內容,還可以與同伴分享情節或觀點,最終提高你對書的理解力。
總之,我建議的理由是,閱讀可以有充分的參與和共同的興趣。我真誠地希望你能考慮我的建議,并期待你的早日答復。
